Showing posts with label editors. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editors. Show all posts

Monday, August 27, 2012

Dear Rocky: Absolutely Crushed


Dear Rocky,

I’m absolutely crushed and I just want to share. 

Last year I finished polishing my fifth YA manuscript (a previous contest finalist!), and in February an editor requested a full.  Elated doesn’t even begin to encompass my joy at sending her the manuscript. 

In April she let me know how much she liked my voice, but she saw a few areas in the pacing and plot that could be improved.  She told me that she would take a second look at the book if I wanted to make those changes, but that it was just her opinion and that others might like the book as written.

Did I want to make the changes?!  Yes!  I’ve been trying to sell a book for years!

It took me about four weeks to finish the edits and once again, off went my hopes and dreams.

I recently heard from her, and while she was very kind, I was absolutely crushed.  She’s accepted a job with another publisher where she’ll only acquire and edit non-fiction.  No offer to forward my book to another editor at her old house.  No comments on my changes.  Nothing.

Writing this was painful, and while I know there’s really nothing to be done, I thought sharing my tale of woe might make me feel better.  I think it did.  Thanks for listening.

Absolutely Crushed


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Dear Absolutely,

I feel your pain.  Truly.

But I also feel the need to put on my “positive-spin” hat and encourage you to get multiple queries out the door as soon as possible.  That way, you’ll once again be filled with hope, which might help offset your crushed emotions.

The editor liked your voice and thought your book deserved consideration.  Remind yourself of that.  Often!  And get those queries out the door so another editor or an agent has the opportunity to enjoy your voice.

CIR recently interviewed Debra Dixon, Editor at BelleBooks and Belle Bridge Books, and when asked what she would like to see more of, Debra said, “Amazing voices.  That answer makes writers want to stab themselves, but we are looking for strong voices.” 

They are looking for strong voices, as is every editor.  Your voice, perhaps.

Thank you for sharing your tale.  Hopefully, someday soon, we’ll receive a joyful, follow-up email from you, one that shares your tale of success.  

Best regards,

Rocky

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Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Ten Things About Writing Most Writers Don't Love

by Pat Stoltey, who loves writing most of the time:

1. Writing takes an enormous amount of time with no guarantee of success. The best advice a writer receives is “Don’t give up your day job.”

2. In order to get published, a writer must write a whole book, revise it multiple times, self-edit the final draft until it shines, then make another round of revisions and editing changes (or two) to satisfy an agent and/or editor.

3. Finding an agent and/or publisher could take years because the competition is fierce, the submission process is cumbersome, and writers are prone to procrastination.

4. Many agents and editors don’t send confirmations when they receive a query or partial, and many don’t send rejection notices. They employ other torture devices as well: offering pitch sessions and slush pile critiques at conferences, taking submissions only on referrals, or conducting public floggings (often called critiques) on their blogs.

5. Once a contract is signed with a traditional publisher, it can still take eighteen months or more for the book to be released (assuming the publisher doesn’t go out of business before the release date, opening the whole new problem of getting your rights back).

6. Self-publishing gets a book published faster, but there are additional expenses involved and the amount of time required for book promotion is even greater. You still won’t be able to quit your day job.

7. The publishing and bookselling industries are changing so fast it takes hours of reading to keep up. Hours of time you don’t have, by the way.

8. Non-writers think all writers make a lot of money. This one always cracks me up.

9. Most writers don’t make a lot of money. Many writers spend more money on editors, supplies, organization dues and conferences, and book promotion than they make in advances and royalties.

10. If a writer gets lucky and produces a bestseller, he will be inundated with requests for free books, blurbs, whole manuscript critiques, public appearances, blog posts, interviews, and money. Success at last?

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Tor Books Editor Moshe Feder Talks With Us About Books, S/F & Food Authenticity

We all know that behind every great book is an editor that beat it into a pulpy perfection. So in my wildest dreams I couldn't have imagined a better assignment than to peek into the mind of one of the great editors of the science fiction and fantasy genres (thank you, CIR!).

Moshe Feder has been a consulting editor with Tor Books since 2004 and was recently nominated for a Hugo award in the Best Editor (long form) category. I am also excited to announce that Moshe will be a guest editor at this year's Gold Conference in September.

Tamela:
Since I have an unusual name that people stumble over, I am sensitive to the issue of pronunciation.

Moshe: A sensitivity I share, so thanks!

Tamela: For people who may want to introduce themselves to you at the RMFW Gold Conference this September, please tell us how to pronounce your name.

Moshe: Well, some folks may remember the Israeli general with the eye patch, Moshe Dayan, so I'm tempted to just say that it's pronounced the same way as his first name, but that may be of limited utility to younger folks or those not familiar with middle east history.

So how about this: it's two syllables, pronounced like "Moe" + "sheh" [i.e., the name of the leader of the Three Stooges, plus the word "shed" without the final "d"].

My friends familiarly shorten it to a single syllable, as if the "e" were silent and just there to make the "o" long, so it becomes something like "Mowsh" (with the vowel sound of "mow," as in "mowing the lawn") and that's fine too.

Moshe is actually a very common Jewish name, since it's the original Hebrew form of "Moses."

Tamela: Thank you for helping us with the pronunciation as well as a bit of the history!

Well, according to your bio, you have been a science fiction professional since 1972. I love that term—science fiction professional.

Moshe: I used it because we also have long had a very active community of "science fiction fans," some of whom eventually develop into pros (and was true in my case). Prominent examples include such masters of the field as Ray Bradbury, Arthur C. Clarke, Isaac Asimov, Robert Silverberg, Harlan Ellison, Larry Niven, Marion Zimmer Bradley, Diane Duane, Jo Walton, Greg Benford, Michael Moorcock, Christopher Priest, Robert Charles Wilson, etc. etc. All these folks started out attending clubs, writing for fanzines, going to conventions, and so on before they sold their first stories.

Tamela: Being such a professional gives you a wonderful perspective on how science fiction has changed and grown over the years. What trends are you seeing in the genre today? What would you like to see in the future?

Moshe: The most important trend in my professional lifetime has been the remarkable growth in the acceptance of SF and fantasy by the mass public, for which we can thank the A-bomb, NASA, "Star Trek," and "Star Wars" primarily, along with the continuing long-term influence of fantasy classics like the Lord of the Rings. It's not unusual now for SF and fantasy to appear on hardcover best seller lists, but I can remember when that was practically unheard of.

On an everyday basis, the striking thing to someone like me who can remember the way it used to be, is the extent to which the imagery and basic concepts of the fantastic genres have become familiar parts of the cultural landscape and common currency in conversation.

For example, I doubt there's anyone in the developed world who doesn't know that the phrase "Beam me up, Scotty." refers to teleportation and that the destination of that transfer is a starship capable of interstellar travel at faster than light speed via a technology called "warp drive." There was a time when only the readers of pulp magazines knew of such things, and anyone else hearing of them dismissed them as junk and nonsense. As a result, we have a much broader potential readership now and, for good or ill, the SF/Fantasy world isn't nearly as insular or as cozy as it used to be.

Within the field, the most important commercial trend has been the reversal of the former hierarchy of popularity. When I started out, there was much more SF published every year than fantasy. These days, fantasy far outsells SF, as the Harry Potter books demonstrated so remarkably, or as you can see by looking at the Times bestseller list as I write this, where all the volumes of George R.R. Martin's great fantasy epic simultaneously appear in multiple formats.

Another important trend, and a very good one in my opinion, is that SF/Fantasy writers aren't all white males any more, with an every-increasing number of talented women and people of color joining the field. It's the women who have been primarily responsible for another important trend, the revival and growth in popularity of what has now come to be called "urban fantasy."

Taking the broader view, SF and modern fantasy are really still relatively young fields, going back in their present form only about 150 years. So what I'd like to see in the future is their continuing growth and maturation.

Tamela: Is there a type or style of science fiction and fantasy that you would recommend aspiring writers pursue or avoid? For example, are there topics that are overdone or ones that you think need greater exploration?

Moshe: Both SF and fantasy are replete with tropes that are used and reused over and over. That's as true for us as it is in the mystery or romance genres, or in general fiction for that matter.

As in those fields, the mere use of familiar ingredients per se isn't fatal, what's important is how you use them. Of the two fantastic genres, it's a paradox that while fantasy is theoretically limitless in scope, almost all of it relies on a very few kinds of settings and characters. As an editor, I certainly appreciate writers who can ring new changes on those or even invent completely new ones. My author Brandon Sanderson is a great example of that.

I'd certainly advise most new writers to avoid trying to patently imitate Tolkien or Robert Jordan, but in the end, almost anything can work if the world-building is vivid enough and the story-telling gripping. Those George R.R. Martin books I mentioned earlier are a good example. They're essentially a recasting of the War of the Roses in an imaginary world. There's actually only a little magic in them (although yes, there are dragons), but what makes the books work is not just the detail with which George has imagined his landscapes and his politics, but the genius with which he's built his huge cast of characters, so many of them so very memorable and real. It makes perfect sense to me that HBO chose those books for their first venture in epic fantasy.

SF, of course, is a field that particularly values novel ideas, but it's only gotten harder to come up with those, as all the low-hanging fruit has been plucked in the decades since Verne and Wells began the harvest, and as science has progressed to ever more esoteric realms.

Increasing sophistication in using what we have has compensated to some extent, as has growth in SF's ability to compete with what we genre folks call "mainstream" fiction in such basic literary values as the quality of prose and the depth of characterization. It will be interesting to see if climate change and population growth lead to a revival of the cautionary ecological SF that was so prominent in the 60s.

My personal interests remain in the farther future, real physics, the science of consciousness, and in the challenge of imagining the alien and conveying it in a way that is both convincing and comprehendible.

Tamela: What catches your attention when reading a manuscript? What makes a one stand out over another?

Moshe: The first thing I respond to is the quality of the prose itself. If it's sub par, I'm not likely to read very far. If it's at least adequate and the work has other virtues, then the door stays open. What will finally make a manuscript stand out will be either the author's storytelling ability or his or her ideas, or both.

Tamela: What do you wish writers would pay more attention to when they are writing? ex. character development, world building, plot etc.

Moshe: Characters we believe in and can care about are essential in ALL fiction. You can't do too much or work too hard where they're concerned. Aspiring writers should try to be astute observers of both the human behavior right around them and in the wider world and also consciously study how the great writers of the past made text portraits on paper come to life.

World building is peculiarly important to SF and fantasy. In a way, the imaginary landscape is the fantastic's defining characteristic. In the best SF and fantasy, the world itself is practically another member of the cast of characters. This is not just a matter of inventiveness, but of hard work in making a world self-consistent and plausible in its own terms.

Clever plotting is great if that's your forté, and I really do appreciate it and love being surprised, but I tend to think it's really the least important story element. Consider, for example, how many of Shakespeare's plots were borrowed.

Tamela: What are some of your favorite books? I'm talking about the books you loved so much that they are dog-eared and tattered.

Moshe: That's a hard question to answer, since there are so many. As it happens, NPR is collecting nominations for a list of 100 great works of SF and fantasy (see http://www.npr.org/2011/06/20/137249678/best-science-fiction-fantasy-books-you-tell-us), so I guess the 15 books I've posted there so far will be as representative a list as any.

In no particular order:

The Man in the High Castle - Philip K. Dick
The Left Hand of Darkness - Ursula K. LeGuin
The Book of the New Sun - Gene Wolfe
Nova - Samuel R. Delany
Snowcrash - Neal Stephenson
Gloriana - Michael Moorcock
Psychohistorical Crisis - Donald Kingsbury
Incandescence - Greg Egan
Dying Inside - Robert Silverberg
The Years of Rice and Salt - Kim Stanley Robinson
Little Big - John Crowley
The Dying Earth - Jack Vance
Brittle Innings - Michael Bishop
The Wreck of 'The The River of Stars' - Michael Flynn
Lady of Mazes - Karl Schroeder

And to add just a few more really well-worn ones (I don't approve of dog ears in books!):

Have Spacesuit Will Travel - Robert A. Heinlein
The Foundation Trilogy - Isaac Asimov
The City and the Stars - Arthur C. Clarke
The Martian Chronicles - Ray Bradbury
Winter's Tale - Mark Helprin
Flatland - E. A. Abbot
Last and First Men - Olaf Stapledon
A Fire Upon the Deep - Vernor Vinge
The Prestige - Christopher Priest
The Great Time Machine Hoax - Keith Laumer
The High Crusade - Poul Anderson

Well, obviously I could go on all day, but that should give you some idea!

Tamela: Are there themes from those books that you'd like to see explored from today's (or tomorrow's) perspective?

Moshe: They're such a diverse group that it's hard to single out any. What they have in common that new writers should strive to replicate is the genius of making the reader suddenly see the universe in a new way and/or a quality of total immersiveness. The best SF and fantasy really can be a time machine, a spaceship, or a magic carpet for the mind.

Tamela: You once wrote a blog post about using a wooden fan to keep yourself cool while on the subway. You commented that many people would fear to resemble a southern belle or a Chinese mandarin, but it didn't bother you because you'd rather be cool. You went on to say that the traditional science fiction reader had a personality that was willing to be considered eccentric if it meant having a practical advantage, but you were not sure the same could be said of science fiction readers today. Do you think the modern science fiction reader is a different animal? If so, how?

Moshe: There was a time when enjoying SF/fantasy automatically made you odd. If you kept it up, you had to be willing to tolerate ridicule and maybe even be a social outsider with an interest no one around you cared to talk about. Today's mass popularity and acceptance of the fantastic genres has made liking them completely "normal." So while I'm sure there are still oddballs and eccentrics and rebels who read SF and fantasy, the mere fact that someone does read them is no longer a shibboleth for those qualities.

Tamela: Has this change effected the genre itself?

Moshe: Maybe a little bit, around the edges, particularly with the SF and fantasy that is packaged and marketed by general publishers as mainstream fiction. (Think of Michael Crichton and his lesser imitators, for example.) But overall, not too much so far, probably because the people who write the stuff are naturally part of the hard core who always would have been SF/Fantasy people.

Tamela: You are a "foodie" with a fondness (some might say obsession) for pizza, lox, bagels, chocolate and ice cream. You seem to prefer traditional recipes over more modern ones.

Moshe: True enough. But those are all foods where I think authenticity is an essential aspect of quality. They are also all foods where interlopers have tried to fob off not just inferior, but fake versions on the public.

Tamela: You collect Coca-Cola memorabilia. Your musical taste runs to classical, jazz or folk. You are an avid New York history buff. I find it fascinating that a man who loves science fiction, a genre that promotes change, innovation and visions for the future, has this preference for the traditional or old-fashioned in his own life. Is this your way of honoring the past?

Moshe: Not consciously, no. Perhaps it's because in a deep sense, SF is a genre about history. The past deserves our respect since it's where we came from, but it shouldn't be worshipped. It should be a guide, not a template. History is the story of the changes that have already occurred. SF is the story of the changes that may yet come.

Tamela: Thank you, Moshe! I am sure that SF and fantasy writers and fans appreciated your insights into the genre.

You can see and ask questions of Moshe Feder during the editor panel at the RMFW Gold Conference this September 9, 10 & 11.


Thursday, May 26, 2011

Networking: How to Connect with Critique Partners, Agents & Editors

From Tamela Buhrke


There is nothing like connecting with a fellow writer when you are stuck or need someone to bounce an idea off. Yet, as your career progresses, you will need more than just a pat on the back. You will need guides and experts who can help you put your writing career into the fast track. When networking to build your writing career, there are several areas you will want to explore. First, find critique groups and writing coaches. Second, network with agents, editors and published authors.


The Benefits of Critique Groups


If you’ve been showcasing your work to friends and family, then you may not be getting the most accurate assessment of your work. Critique groups can be a healthy reality check, offering feedback from more experienced writers.


If you are nervous about meeting with people, or just don’t have the time for an ongoing critique group, then an online critique site is the way to go. The nice thing about starting with an online site is that it’s impersonal. You won't be worried about hurting a friend’s feelings and they won’t worry about hurting yours. The critique of your work will be unbiased. Here are a few online critique sites:



Each of these sites offers different styles for critiques. Some are offered by fellow writers and some by regular readers. Each will offer a different perspective so use your judgement to see which site is right for you.


If you need something more consistent and personal, that’s when a real world critique group might be better for you. One of the benefits of a critique group that meets in person is that you get more than just the feedback on your own work. You get friendship and camaraderie. You also have the benefit of learning each other’s style. The critiques can become more relevant and personalized.


How do you find a local critique group? Sometimes writing organizations have critique groups you can join—Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers does here. You can also build one yourself. Start by pulling from the friendships you have built in your writing communities. Once you have a base, you can build your group by posting membership openings on sites like Craig’s List, Meetup and even Twitter.


Networking with Agents & Editors


Once you have your critique groups, now it’s time to find people who can give you insider industry information. There is no better place to get to know and learn from agents and editors than Facebook and Twitter.


I heard that collective groan. I have no sympathy for you.


With these two social media sites, you can tap directly into the minds and hearts of the most sought after people in the publishing industry; agents, editors and successful authors. Every day, I follow agents and editors on Twitter. I read agent’s complaints about industry issues and query letters mishaps. I see their requests for certain genres or styles of work. Reading their tweets regularly is a great way to get to know the style and interests of specific agents.


Best of all, you can often ask them questions about your genre and get tips on everything from the best time of the year to query to how to market your book and more. Just please, please don’t try to pitch or query an agent or editor on Twitter or Facebook. That is considered rude. Instead, use the opportunity to learn from and about them.


Be professional. These social networking sites provide an opportunity for getting information and starting intelligent conversations. Earn respect from these people by being interested in them and learning from them. Build a relationship with them and it can only benefit you as you go into pitch sessions or send query letters.


Networking this way works. My experience is a perfect example. Last summer I was on Facebook, searching for writing groups. I ran across the RMFW Facebook page. On that page, I chatted with a someone named Dave. I didn't know him, but he knew a lot about the upcoming Gold conference. We agreed to connect at the Conference. After our meeting, I offered to help him with this blog. After some time to consider it, he agreed. Now I blog with this great group of writers and have had the opportunity to interview agents and editors. If I hadn’t started that conversation with Dave on Facebook, I wouldn’t have had this wonderful opportunity.


That is the power of networking.


Next week we'll take networking to a whole other level. I'll go over how to use your connections to build a marketing team and grow your readership.


See you next week!

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Writers Over The Edge: Granny Smith, Mystery Writer

A humorous short by Tamela Buhrke on the length's we writers might go to get, and stay, published.


Office lights zipped past as she plunged through the darkness. Her hair whipped her face, her bones creaked and her bladder was decidedly unhappy. It had been a long time since she’d last done this. But it couldn’t be helped. She had tried to reason with them like a civilized person. They just wouldn’t listen.


She took her mind off her frustration by counting the floors as they flew by. Squeezing her grip as she neared the seventeenth, she slowed to a stop and righted herself to face the window. She was pleased to see that it was just the way she had remembered it, a wall of windows with large ones on top and small ones near the floor. By the looks of them, the small ones had originally opened for ventilation. They were sealed now. It was just as well. Those small vent opening required too many bodily contortions. Her knees would never have allowed it.


The office was Jeff McGee’s. He was the senior editor for her publishing company. Jeff, was in his office late, as usual. How many times had she told him he was getting too old to work so late? Yet, here he was reading email at 10pm. With his back to the window, he had no idea she was dangling there. Which, of course, was just the way she wanted it.


Any second now, her grandson would be calling; impersonating the downstairs guard to get the editor out of his office. He was an extraordinary boy with a talent for impersonations. Unlike his parents -- who thought he should go to law school, if you can imagine it -- she had high hopes that he would go into acting.


As soon as Jeff hung up the phone and was out of his office, she attached two suction cups to the lower window then inserted a small tool into the rubberized moulding. Quickly carving around the window, she pushed forward with the suction cups and set the glass on the floor of the office.


Once inside, she donned a black ski mask and took her place by the door. When a confused Jeff returned to the office, she sprayed him with the knockout gas she’d been delighted to find in a box in her attic. To her surprise, it still worked beautifully.


Grunting, she hauled Jeff by his legs across the room. Oh, my. He was at least thirty pounds heavier than the last time she’d done this. He really needed to take better care of himself. She had just trussed him up when he began to groan and rubbed a temple. Gently squeezed him out the window, she slipped her voice modulator under her mask-- another pleasant surprise from the attic.


He opened his eyes.


Oh, dear. He shrieked quite a bit louder and longer than she had expected. The poor man was going to give himself a heart attack. She waved her arms to direct his attention back into the office and away from the drop below him.


“Jeffrey McGee,” she called in her altered, much lower voice. “Listen to me and you will live a long and happy life.”


Jeff’s wide eyes focused in her direction.


“Good,” she crooned. “Jeff, what I am about to tell you is a matter of national security.”


She’d used this script, modified somewhat for each occasion, ever since the Company had recruited her during her circus days. They had found her world travel and athletic flexibility an invaluable asset. Her experiences with them had been put to good use in her mystery writing career. She found writing a pleasant diversion during retirement and was not about to give it up.


“You were planning to terminate the book contract of a woman named Granny Smith. We need you to renew her contract for another five books.”


“Why?” Jeff asked meekly, beginning to sway a bit in the breeze.


She stumbled for a moment. Why indeed?


“That’s classified. The important thing is that you do as you are told! Your country will be forever in your debt.”


Jeff swallowed, gave a glance at the seventeen stories below him, and nodded. Satisfied, granny sprayed him with knockout gas, dragged him inside, cut the rope and propped him at his desk. She decided to leave the halter on him and put the frayed part of rope in his right hand. A small token to remind him that she meant business.


Pulling a janitor’s cap and uniform out of her backpack, she wandered out of the building limping and rubbing her hip. Oh, darn. Her sciatica was acting up.