I was studying a blog on deep editing and this made me laugh out loud, so I thought I would share.
Beware of flying body parts!
No: Her eyes flew across the room.
Yes: Her gaze flew across the room.
Regards, Parts is Parts
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Ha! You've reminded me of my first manuscript draft. I believe I had eyes crawling around a dungeon. Eew. Oh, the things we learn!
Thank you for an excellent and funny reminder.
Rocky
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